unfinished haiku

By littleditty

Thu, 06 Nov 2008
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5 comments
 

one drop in the sea
desiring to drink oceans
of how I love you

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Comments

Submitted by Bradene on
Love this little haiku LD. love haiku. Val x

Submitted by yaerink1203 on
dont take it seriously, but it really didn't make that much sense to me but i guess it was okay... o_O

- Miss_Poet

Submitted by yaerink1203 on
dont take it seriously, but it really didn't make that much sense to me but i guess it was okay... o_O

- Miss_Poet

Submitted by Nolan on
Your Haiku is lovely but I would have liked it even more like this, "one drop in the sea desiring to drink oceans how I love you" Take care littleditty! &&
 

Submitted by littleditty on
Cheers Nolan :)