A stroll
By LKilby
Tue, 28 Sep 2010
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Dusk-lit lights of glowing fire
In the evening light they glide
Tall and handsome, with glowing embers in his eyes
He leaned across to take her hand;
Eyes locked in a deadly battle,
Raging emotions over forthcoming war.
Whispers of a thousand leaves,
Dying in the cold, the sorrow of life.
He lowers his head, drops her hands,
And as a coward of this war,
He turns his back and strides.
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Very atmoshperic, this one,
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Very atmoshperic, this one, Liam! Love these lines:
'Eyes locked in a deadly battle,
Raging emotions over forthcoming war.'
Only wish it had a happier ending ;)
Magic xxx
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I really like it too -
Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
I really like it too - interesting experiment!
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