Jack
By loading
Sun, 17 Jun 2012
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His smile’s so mysterious
He can never be serious
He leaves me standing
My mouth agape
When he makes his
Lucky escape.
His unpredictable ways
His unfocused gaze
His unsteady stride
I don’t even who’s side
He’s on..And I don’t care.
‘Cause there’s no one quite like him,
He’s the one and the only,
He’s just irreplaceable,
When he leaves he’s untraceable.
When it comes to making me smile,
You’ve just got that knack,
Oh Jack....
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Cute. I like it. :) I'm not
Permalink Submitted by Jessiibear on
Cute. I like it. :) I'm not a poet, well, I personally don't think I'm very good at writing poetry... There are so many fantastic poets — and well, people altogether — on this site. Search around, comment if you will on others' work (if you haven't already done so), and simply feed off of the talent, haha. You seem quite talented already; it's just a thought.
By the way, welcome to ABCtales.
Jess
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Nice, loading. Does Jack
Permalink Submitted by Parson Thru on
Nice, loading. Does Jack purr?
Parson Thru
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Really enjoyed this. I look
Permalink Submitted by well-wisher on
Really enjoyed this. I look forward to reading your other poems.
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