just a flagrant disregard of the english language

By lostallfaith

Sat, 11 Jun 2011
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poor grammar and sloppy punctuation
weave through my lines.
like the commotion in my head.
and,
i am not sure weather
i write with a lack of knowledge/
education or verse
...or just a flagrant disregard of the english language
BUT
one would still like
to remain
anonymous
to the masses
these words are spoken from my tourniquet'd heart.

Certificate 18
The Keeper (...and you lost me).
Autobiography

Comments

Submitted by Highhat on
You spelt whether like the weather- hehe

Submitted by celticman on
yeh, whether/ weather, but I sympathize. I'm not exactly great with grammar myself. The problem is what is on the page is different from what we know. We superimpose our view of the world onto the screen or page and because it makes sense to us we imagine it makes sense.

 

Submitted by lostallfaith on
hey Highhat and Celticman, thank you. I believe that sometimes the imperfections of what we write add to the uniqueness, and thus often making things just that little bit more closer to home, little bit more tangible, little bit more fun and perfect. lostallfaith.