Notes on clouds
By Louise178
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Grey clouds push by push by
in the powder blue of evening sky
trees stand lonely still
against darkened distant hills
rolling along rolling around
this small Lancashire town
of forgotten woollen mills.
The clouds were heavy with old souls
trying to stop to hang on against this
relentless wind to be where they once
lived but no, on they travelled being joined
by yet another, breaking up then coming
together, heated chilled wet through
when will we come back to you
to feel and see our own flesh
left behind in cities in towns, stuck
in the ground to evaporatedly rise
into grey soul bearing clouds.
Unaware of the trees or hills beneath
of stone walls running
outlining farmers fields
the sheep grazing
the wind smiling
the sun almighty
unaware were we of each hour passing
they will come they will come
old souls in clouds heavy with grey
to take some life and darken your day
PETER
The old grey soul stepped down from the sky
He came in and sat down by my fireside
He moaned he lamented, I gave
him some sherry and a warm mince pie.
I said you are lucky to stop for a while
The grey clouds don't stop they push by push by
in the powder blue of sky or squalling skies or
in the black of night, so please begin, who are you ??
I am a weary traveller of the night
and yes you are right, I stepped down
from a cloud, but I am in the wrong place
in the wrong time. I am Peter, I lived not here
but up yonder, up at the farm with
my mother and father.
I can take you I said, throwing on my coat
my old rubber boots hat and scarf
wrap your arms around me, hold on tight,
with his legs floating upwards behind
we marched on we marched on
for I was determined to give Peter
some peace of mind.
We looked in windows
studied the land
found an old tractor
stuck in the ground
round and round we walked
encircling his old home
till my legs ached
and Peter seemed pleased.
We trudged back to my fireside
where Peter was restless
he couldn't settle, he wanted to tell James
his cousin, of the things he had seen.
I opened the door, we peered up
in the dark, Peter thanked me
and let go of my hand, up he
started to drift. I hope I had helped
this lonely old soul
from the heavy grey clouds....
When the wind blows and gently moans
you may hear a tapping a scrapping
open your door to see if there is waiting
a lonely old soul from the heavy grey clouds.
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I really enjoyed reading this
I really enjoyed reading this poem and the story within set the scene for an adventure. Thank you for sharing. Jenny.
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