Find a way

By LTBurbery

Wed, 29 Jul 2009
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I've got to find a way,
Back to higher ground,
I was there before,
Today I fell back down.

I didn't mind to lose,
But now I have to win,
Your voice invading thoughts,
I feel you coming in,
I feel you coming in.

Peeling open me,
Into the deep blue sea,
Where we come from,
Where we belong.

Your calling out my sins,
The ones I've hidden deep within,
So desperate I have prayed,
For a little light today.

You have to hold your breathe,
When you live in someone elses head,
But there's a little light I see,
When your peeling open me.

Peeling open me,
Into the deep blue sea,
Where we come from,
Where we belong.

Certificate U
Autobiography

Comments

Submitted by Beeme on
This flows superbly, I like the repeated chorus and there are some great images here. It is a very unique poem. I really enjoyed it! :-) I loved this verse; 'You have to hold your breathe, When you live in someone elses head, But there's a little light I see, When your peeling open me.' Beeme xx

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Submitted by LTBurbery on
Thanks for the compliment Beeme, it is much appreciated. I look forward to reading more of yours. Lee:)