Feeling Blue

By luigi_pagano

Sun, 08 Nov 2020
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A chump by the name of Trump

seems to have gotten the hump

and tells a tale of woe

as he suffered a blow

and fell to earth with a bump.

 

© Luigi Pagano 2020

 

Certificate U
Poem
Mutevoli pensieri
Other Non-fiction
Humour

Comments

Submitted by marandina on

Pour Trump, Trump, Trumpety Trump. Who knew a leader thousands of miles away in a differnt country could illicit such emotion over here? Oh well...real gone kid.

 

Submitted by onemorething on

Nice little rhyme. I can see it catching on! x

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

A tongue-in-cheek limerick, Rachel but It won't catch on with his supporters. cheeky

Luigi x

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

Mine is just an unbiased observation reflecting the recent events, Paul. My emotions are in check. cool
May I point out a typo? It should be elicit not illicit. That's what Trump is claiming about the election result.

Cheers, Luigi.

 

 

Submitted by marandina on

Note to self - never leave a comment without sanity checking. Thanks for the correctiob. Paul :)

 

Submitted by marandina on

*Correction

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

Don't worry it happens to me all the time. Now not so often as I have Grammarly to let me know where I'm going wrong.

Best, Luigi.

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

yes

 

Submitted by Tom Brown on

Nice nice! Love limericks, good one!

You really are good. Tom

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

Much obliged for your kind words, Tom. yes

 

Submitted by David Kirtley on

Very appropriate and succinct!

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

Thanks, David.