Maud's Garden
By luigi_pagano
Thu, 18 Dec 2008
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See how Maud’s garden flourishes
with the soil moist and fertile.
She cares for it and she nourishes
it, skilfully and with great style.
Very confident and self-sufficient
she can manage the lot by herself
though people judge her deficient
for having been left on the shelf.
Sometimes lazy, she needs a push
but she’s good, with nimble fingers,
at planting or trimming her bush
on which her hand softly lingers.
She believes in self-pollination
and is positive that anyone can
achieve growth or propagation
without the intervention of man.
I don’t know if I like the concept
as expressed by dear old Maud
but I am prepared to accept
that many females will applaud.
© Luigi Pagano 2008
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Luigi- strange as it may
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Luigi- strange as it may seem, I truly was only thinking about you today, and wondering if you were OK. I'd missed you of late.
But ... I needn't have worried. You are in fine form:-) The third stanza certainly one of your finest and, dare I say, sauciest ;-) Vintage Luigi, most certainly.
Tina xxx
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Well, you certainly raised a
Well, you certainly raised a smile here... Not awfully PC, Luigi, and all the better for it, I think. Thanks for cheering me up no end.
Ewan
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*applauds* what is not PC
Permalink Submitted by littleditty on
*applauds* what is not PC about this poem? Have i misunderstood something? I think its sweet - nice of the narrator of the poem to want to help out, but i know enthusiastic gardeners have their own tried and tested methods. Does Maud know Flora, the Komodo dragon of London Zoo fame? Now that's a poem ive been meaning to write -can i borrow Maud sometime, pop her in a poem, and see if i can germinate a bit of a creative spark? lol - i'm going now, this comment is completely out of control and needs restraining!! Thanks Luigi - i needed a smile desperately :o)xx
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Very good luigi. It reminds
Very good luigi. It reminds me of a song heard occasionally in the Caribbean about a lawn-mower man. I'll say no more.
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It's a calypso called 'Lawn
It's a calypso called 'Lawn 'Em Down' by Foreigner Frank. Very funny but rather rude. Caused quite a stir at the Bridgetown Cropover some years back. I've been trying to track down a copy.
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I did smile to myself
I did smile to myself halfway through too. Your poem was quite tongue in cheek. Entertaining.
cjm
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