My First Kiss

Cherry

By luigi_pagano

Tue, 02 Sep 2008
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The notion she would kiss me
had not entered my head
but it happened unexpectedly
inside the garden shed.

She brushed her rosebud mouth,
invitingly, against mine
and I felt ten thousand volts
running down my spine.

Her tongue was like a snake,
slithering inside my lips;
she gave vent to her emotion
with the swaying of her hips.

As it was my first kiss
- and I was, at the time, naïve -
I thought it was natural:
I was Adam, tempted by Eve.

Was it real, or was it a dream?
Memories can often deceive.
Yet I’m sure she gave me a gift
that I’ll treasure as long as I live.

© Luigi Pagano 2008

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Comments

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Ah, Luigi. Was it real or was it but a dream? I have spent my whole life asking the selfsame question. One day,no doubt, I shall find out the truth. A beautiful poem, in true Luigi style. Enjoyed;-) SSS xxxx

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on
Tina you are a brick and a boost to my morale. Love, Luigi xxxx

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi luigi, just running down over some of the older works on ABC Tales, just had to let you know that this poem made me laugh, I think it's one of my favourites of yours. Jenny.

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on
Do you know Jenny, I had forgotten this - it goes back to 2008 - but I am glad you ferretted it out and selected it as one of your favourites. Many thanks. Luigi x