That Girl

By Lupensai

Wed, 16 Jan 2013
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You killed her,
That girl in red.
Slit her throat with silent breath,
Defiled her body with stony glare.
Now her blood feeds the ground
As she asks for help,
And you ignore.

Because you do not care.

Certificate 15
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Submitted by scratch on
The third line is excellent. I detect a recurrent image of blood soaked ground here (it cropped up in you pice called 'You'. It is a powerful image and you have used it to good effect.