Gladly - an old poem re-edit.

By maisie

Sun, 25 Sep 2016
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Gladly
 
Gladly like the feathery motion
Of a hummingbird's total floatation,
Speed and dexterity, in determination
I will love you.
 
Glamourusly as the purr of a cat,
Waiting to be fed, will I move so,
and not so, lightly touch, soft 
I'll feel, fur to skin.
 
Honestly will I be open to you,
And yet within - we'll amoeba.
A well weathered soul, two holes
made whole, in that 
 
I cannot stop - all the complexities,
nature invented, skin vibration.
Until the time of hibernation
is finished and the land will be
 
drenched, and the dryness of Nature
is explained, 
by the coming of Spring.
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Submitted by Rhiannonw on

I can't follow all you have in mind, Maisie, but you seem to have some interesting metaphoric expressions  to try to depict the tentativeness of expressing love in our limited understanding of one another in this world. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

I can't follow all you have in mind, Maisie, but you seem to have some interesting metaphoric expressions  to try to depict the tentativeness of expressing love in our limited understanding of one another in this world. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by maisie on

exactly what I was after originally with this one, and I sell my stuff now adays, so I tend to keep a few for here that really aren't very good, yet are enjoyable for practise....    

I've written an epic poem recently and am not sure its good enough for publication, so its on the back boilet so to speak...

maisie angel Guess what?  I'm still alive!