if

By maisie

Tue, 10 Apr 2012
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If...
.
If it was love -
it was as the wind is:
a crime passionale to tender kiss.
.
if it was bliss:
then remember this; that love
is struck with flint under stars.
.
if it was fake:
this smile of face, this touch.
We are both lost...

(c) Rosalind J. Lee (04/2012)

Certificate U
ElasticBand
Love

Comments

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
As you say, Maisie, this is quite different from Rudyward Kipling's famous 'If', but beautiful, nonetheless. Very much enjoyed. Tina

 

Submitted by maisie on
Cheers Tina, I was feeling quite low when I wrote it. I do hope somewhere in the world love is more than a hormonal high!

maisie angel Guess what?  I'm still alive!