Relics From A Bygone Era
By MaliciousMudkip
Mon, 28 Nov 2011
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Feet and hands are useless,
their labours and toils are fruitless.
Flesh and body replaced with steel,
and dead hands, with no means to feel.
Metal, with oil and grease below,
where tides of blood once flowed.
Clockwork hearts without feeling,
artificial life lived without meaning.
Clanking mechanical cogs and gears
and empty souls constructed without fear.
Dead skies filled with fire and smoke,
Mother Nature strangled, beaten and broke.
The bones of man reduced to ancient relics,
a race destroyed, without relish.
Hollow eyes, encased in empty shells,
like the porcelain skulls crushed by their hell.
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ummm - coould this be sung?
ummm - coould this be sung?
maisie Guess what? I'm still alive!
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Yes, and they call this
Yes, and they call this progress. Flesh and body replaced with steel - very good.
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Malicious, I you have the
Malicious, I you have the time or the inclination I would really appreciate a read or even better a comment on my submission ASBO I am unhappy with it as it stands. If you can't do it that's still ok.
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I have more Maliscious.
I have more Maliscious. Many thanks for the post on ASBO. I have some rhyming shite that I spend time with. but I'm reluctant because of the dum de dum crap. And also some generational (sic) writhing that is difficult for me to post. But then this post is getting indulgent, and indulgence is shite.
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Strong imaging. A memorable
Permalink Submitted by Linda Wigzell Cress on
Strong imaging. A memorable poem.
Linda
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