Pause.

By marcuscleaver

Tue, 29 Mar 2011
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Stand still above the Earth,
Look on the world below,
Stand and admire life's worth.

The mildness of the surf,
The waves they to and fro',
Stand still above the Earth.

A daily virgin birth,
A seed begins to grow,
Stand and admire life's worth.

Feel the wind shake with mirth,
It's drift it's cooling blow,
Stand still above the Earth.

So full: a handsome girth,
Worship that healthy glow,
Stand and admire life's worth.

Do we awake from birth?
Simpler to ride the flow,
Stand still above the Earth,
Stand and admire life's worth.

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Comments

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
I like this marcus. Just a small point, stanza four, neither 'its' needs its apostrophe, if you see what I mean;-) This stanza in particular stands out for me:- "The mildness of the surf, The waves they to and fro', Stand still above the Earth."

 

Submitted by L G Meadows on
"Feel the wind shake with mirth" Love this line, very descriptive of the wind! Like it very much!