The Last Room
By mark p
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Don't take room 217, they told me
But that was the last one left
'First right, then wrong', said the receptionist.
'Don't you mean left?', I said.
Twin sisters followed me down the corridor,
Blood lapping at their ankles,
'Don't take room 217', they insisted,
But that was the last one left.
The son I hadn't fathered
Trundled past on a tricycle,
'Redrum!,' he cried , an anagram
to an invisible chum.
Trundled on loose boards
Onto a crimson carpet floor,
Blood lapping at his wheels,
'Don't take room 217!, he cried.
The topiary came alive outside
Malevolent creatures, snipped into life,
I had the urge to kill the wife
I had not yet met.
And to call out 'Heeere's Johnny'
Swinging axe in dirty hand,
All this, as I turned the key
to room 217.
( My tribute to Stephen King's 'The Shining, and Stanley Kubrick's adaptation thereof)
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I liked the quirkiness of
I liked the quirkiness of this. Great stuff !
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Planning a murder in such a
Planning a murder in such a jaunty way ...
Malevolent creatures, snipped into life,
I had the urge to kill the wife
This is good. I enjoyed reading it.
Turlough
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