Queen Anne's Lace
By Melkur
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Gauzy veil of a wild crop in winter,
Faint and dry as the lightest crunch of snow
Stepping out in faith, land of the hinter
Spiralling cobweb elegant as bow.
How snow falls far softer outside the church,
The only touch of colour in the group
A robin so red watching from his perch,
His breast as a dash of tomato soup.
The frost spreads out its stiff wedding pattern
Glistening guidance down on towpath mile
Lock gates now standing fast from bow to stern,
Their summer story halted for a while.
Now to the wood-smoke, the fire to provide
Orange and warming, always by her side.
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Some wonderful metaphors in
Some wonderful metaphors in your poem, especially:-
The only touch of colour in the group
A robin so red watching from his perch,
His breast as a dash of tomato soup.
Love the originality.
Jenny.
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