Dance of Destruction

By merebrockett

Wed, 02 Jul 2014

4 comments

1 likes

Anger flows

Like lava

Hot and sticky

Destruction

Frustration and Dissapointment dance

Hurt binds them

Everything is altered

Devastation left behind

Scorched feelings

Lost Hope

Permalink Submitted by merebrockett on Wed, 2014-07-02 15:34

What I feel after anger.

Permalink Submitted by God'sPoeticChild on Wed, 2014-07-02 15:37

This can relate to other people. It's like the After Feeling of being angry. Nice. I love it. I know this feeling :)

God's Poetic Child

Permalink Submitted by merebrockett on Wed, 2014-07-02 15:50

I know I am feeling this way today. I didn't get outwardly angry but was on fire inside all night. It is a gross feeling today like a hangover.

Permalink Submitted by maisie on Thu, 2014-07-03 06:09

funny I identified with this, nice crafting of poem - not sure that it comes over as a agony peice at all.

so no sympathy :) keep on doing it. please

maisie Guess what? I'm still alive!