Aftermath
By MistakenMagic
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You had the last word – branded me with it.
Ran myself a bath to remove your mark
and made sure steam pencilled out the mirror.
I slid into the grey water to stew.
But it was too hot - almost volcanic.
My knees rose, red islands. I was on fire.
The plan failed. Finally bored with burning,
I pulled the plug. Sweet, certain gravity;
a tornado tangoed over the hole.
Water rushed to it – an escaping sea
drawn in by the bitter, heart-broken moon.
The warmth withdrew. Left me beached, stranded;
the dry, shrivelled whale giving her swan song.
Shivering, I curled up like a foetus –
surprised with the perfect fit; stark bath-womb.
Stayed there, waiting for the numbness to leave.
That – or my sister and the soft, hot hands
of a towel, telling me it’s OK.
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Hi Magic. Lovely piece
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That's exactly how it goes
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Very beautifully put Magic:)
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Very good Magic and up to
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I really like this one,
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I loved the metaphors magic,
Bea :-)
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