EXAMINATION
By moonphish
Thu, 07 Mar 2013
- 787 reads
3 comments
life is like a painting
if examined near to eye
you'll see the swirling textures
where the paint was left to dry
.
but when you're standing further
all those cracks just fade away
you only see the beauty
of the artist's brush at play
.
life is like a painting
when those swirling colors spin
and all becomes confusing
just step back to take it in
.
life is quite like dancing
and if grace we hope to earn
we have to know the movements
and with patience, we will learn
.
when one begins a dance step
it is wise to start off slow
to find out what the hands must do
and where the feet must go
.
life is quite like dancing
if the tempo gets too quick
and all becomes confusing
then some slowing does the trick
- Log in to post comments
Comments
Loved the comparison of life
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Loved the comparison of life being like a piece of art.
Like you say sometimes we just have to step back, and
look at the bigger picture.
Brilliant writing as always alvin.
Jenny.
- Log in to post comments
I particularly liked the
I particularly liked the last 2 stanzas re slowing down and thinking. The whole reminded me of our view being sometimes like seeing the backside of a tapestry work! But 'grace' (v.4) means unearned favour, I think, so it is accepting grace to help persevere and improve our 'movements' that seems to be important! Rhiannon
- Log in to post comments