MY WANTING HEART

By moonphish

Fri, 27 Feb 2015
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i make myself agendas
to maintain my mental health
the cost is not a factor here
despite my lack of wealth
.
it's such a risky gamble
that i'd better play it smart
my brain is working overtime
to please my wanting heart
.
it takes a lot of planning
for the heavens to align
toss in a little dash of luck
and let it age like wine
.
can't have those ducks all scattered
or that horse before the cart
my brain is working overtime
to please my wanting heart
.
i'm always double checking
every item on my list
no questions should be overlooked
no answers should be missed
.
exact pinpoint precision
not a wildly errant dart
my brain is working overtime
to please my wanting heart
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Comments

Submitted by tibi popovici on

I read it too many times..., and perhaps I will do it again smiley So great, too good...

Submitted by moonphish on

thanks so much, tibi...glad you enjoyed

Submitted by Philip Sidney on

I really like this poem, I wish I could be this sort of organised tick list erson.  I like of the rhythm reflects the ideas of a tick list.

Submitted by moonphish on

thanks phil...perfect...that was the effect i was aiming for

Submitted by Ray Schaufeld on

There's a lot contained within this tidy little rhyme, Moonphish. Like it.

Submitted by moonphish on

thanks elsie...i appreciate your time and kind words