SWIMMING POOL

By moonphish

Thu, 13 Dec 2012
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9 comments
 

in a swimming pool
floating weightlessly, i heard
my mother's heartbeat

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Submitted by Jessiibear on
Aww, that's so nice. Two thumbs up! -What'sHerFace.

Jess

Submitted by Highhat on
best sound in the world.

Submitted by moonphish on
thanks Jessica and Pia...glad you both enjoyed :) - alvin

Submitted by Parson Thru on
A womb with a view. Lovely alvin.

Parson Thru

Submitted by moonphish on
lol...exactly...thanks Parson :) - alvin

Submitted by Mark Heathcote on
Nice one!

Mark Heathcote

Submitted by moonphish on
thanks Mark :) - alvin

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Wonderful, Alvin;-) Less is often more, as here. Tina

 

Submitted by moonphish on
thanks Tina...glad you enjoyed :) - alvin