WHEN BODIES MISBEHAVE

By moonphish
Sun, 03 Aug 2014
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one wonders what's occurring
when two persons lay in bed
with flesh that's still awake
while drowsing soundly, are their heads
.
flesh might demand some friction
science fiction ? i think not
it's snowy in the mountains
yet the valley's still so hot
.
then fingers start outreaching
they're beseeching, soundlessly
soon, nature finds its harbour
while the mind's away at sea
.
you'd think you would awaken
you're mistaken, you would not
for flesh is very sneaky
not desiring to get caught
.
sometimes, our recollections
are reflections of our skin
which owns its special memories
but keeps them deep within
.
so have a wondrous night, now
sleep so tight, now, be its slave
let's put our minds to rest
and let our bodies misbehave
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"then fingers start
"then fingers start outreaching
they're beseeching, soundlessly
soon, nature finds its harbour
while the mind's away at sea" my favourite bit. I think its worthy of editing :) some bits are rocky.
maisie Guess what? I'm still alive!
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Reader-response theory activated
Girls grow up with older ladies telling us that guys are just after sex ... emotionless, mindless sex... I guess they could use this poem to back up their arguments and warnings...
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