Bulbous-Bee

By mrpeterjthomas

Mon, 25 Apr 2016

4 comments

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The bumblebee it takes to wing,

A buzz, a leap and flight,

But how can the bulbous bumblebee

Fly, it seems not right.

Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on Mon, 2016-04-25 16:54

I often wonder how those tiny wings can carry such a huge furry body.

Jenny.

Permalink Submitted by mrpeterjthomas on Tue, 2016-04-26 20:28

me too!

Permalink Submitted by Rhiannonw on Mon, 2016-04-25 20:57

Nice sound to 'bulbous bumblebee'!

Its aerodynamics are wonderfully made. Rhiannon

(I think you need to drop the comma after 'bumblebee' so it flows on to 'Fly' of the last line?)

Permalink Submitted by mrpeterjthomas on Tue, 2016-04-26 20:30

I wasn't sure about the comma, I thing it just flew into the sentence. I think you are right.

Thank you