Bad Sad
By nickynoo02
Mon, 07 Nov 2011
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I want to make you happy want to make you smile if not only for forever just maybe for a little while. I know that life has treat you badly sucked you in and spat you out. But what if happiness was in your head just to release the doubt. When you were a child you looked up above the sky. The fun things made you happy you didn’t need to cry. Beneath that sad expression beneath that dismal Frown. There is a happy person there is a silly clown squirming squealing to get out wanting to release that annoying nagging doubt.
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Nice rhyming light verse.
Permalink Submitted by hilary west on
Nice rhyming light verse. You might want to rearrange it into lines rather than run it on. It's up to you. Best Wishes, Hilary West
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