Brainwash
By Nolan
Fri, 17 Jul 2015
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The diamond studs in our souls
the golden fleece of our spirits
The darkest night
no star is bright
Running through the wood
like a sliver stream
like a golden beam
In front of the TV
you sit down for the feast
Myriads of myriads of myriads
of silver wires in your head
connected to the beast
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There are some beautiful and
Permalink Submitted by london_calling79 on
There are some beautiful and unusual images in here. Lovely work.
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the end stanza
is the best bit, only you forgot the full stop at the end. The repeated 'like' is annoying. However I do like the strangeness of it. Please edit.
maisie Guess what? I'm still alive!
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