Every shadow is of the sun
By OKSauce
Sat, 13 Apr 2013
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Every shadow is of the sun.
A buzzard, spinning under light,
Haunts a birdlike piece of ground
Where dandelions shake.
A mile away, on the world’s skirts,
Nightmare machines quiver unseen,
And the soil is scarred by the shapes of men.
Every shadow is of the sun.
The violent bloom that burns my mask
Rips my shape from end to end,
And paints my likeness on the grass.
That steals the essence of trees,
Light-locks the staring homes,
And paints a pattern on the world’s bones.
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You have a good eye and the
You have a good eye and the ability to convey natural order and truth. In doing so you manage to communicate a greater message. This in part reminds me of Hugh's and that can never be a bad thing. There is a lot to like about this, especialy the overarching view that the buzzard has and the the telescoping to your shadow on the grass. Another quality effort.
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I agree with Scratch,
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I agree with Scratch, OKSauce, it's a beautiful piece and it's very well thought out.
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you weave words
you weave words wonderfully...i like this very much :) - alvin
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