Chuffed

By paborama

Thu, 06 Apr 2017
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The cleaner grabs the cellophane on the third attempt and deposits it from her grabber to her wheeled dustcart.  And just in time, the announcement comes as the intercity express arrives, blasting the platform in diesel and wind.

Certificate PG
Story
On Track
Talecatching

Comments

Submitted by Parson Thru on

Instant reality.

Parson Thru

Submitted by Di_Hard on

This is so vivid, like a good short poem.