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By midgeryall
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Your words
each phoneme
coarse, like sand grains
caught in an oyster.
I swallow them whole.
Gulping,
the whorls of salty slime
swim through my gut.
I'm sick
to death
of noisy silences,
searching glances.
Your eyes,
my lighthouse,
faded moons ago;
and adrift on a stormy sea
I feel my way to shore
through darkness.
I thought I knew the way, but
in the black
I lost you.
Those eyes of yours,
so blue,
even when they gave up shining,
I thought I saw a flicker.
But like a scented candle
on the bath-side,
burned down to the wick,
you didn't have it in you
anymore.
O carry me, tide;
Float me far away from here.
I know the sun will rise
in the morning.
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The images of the sea are so
The images of the sea are so strong in this, and the reference to the 'noisy silences' are spot on. For me, the metaphor of the scented candle by the bathtub was less original and less strong and jarred with the rest. A lovely piece of writing though.
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