Keep going

Cherry

By Parson Thru

Mon, 19 Aug 2013
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5 comments
 

Sometimes you just have to say
Keep going

Keep going
Though no one can point to where

Keep going
Though no one can tell you why

So you pick yourself up
and you look for the sun and you walk

Sometimes you have to keep going
because there is no place to stop

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The found summer of a motorcycle hermit
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Comments

Submitted by Bee on

Apart from the title message, you convey the feeling of not really seeing the point, but having to do what needs to be done, and in the process, hopefully coming out the other side. The last two lines are especially true, but I liked the sounds of 'walk' and 'stop'. Also, the line ends- 'where, why, walk and stop' work brilliantly. 

Loved this, and it meant a lot to me - especially as I said, those last two lines.

Bee

Submitted by Parson Thru on

Thanks Bee. Lovely of you again. I like your penultimate line best of all. Thank you. Glad you enjoyed reading it.

Parson Thru

Submitted by Parson Thru on

Thank you CP!

Parson Thru

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Nice one, PT;-)

 

Submitted by Parson Thru on

Thanks Tina.

Hope you're well. x

Parson Thru