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By Parson Thru
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So long.
So long ago, I fell for you.
I was eleven.
You were thirty and married.
I carried your photograph,
from a newspaper, I think.
Beaming smile, laughing eyes,
hair of deep red (ginger).
Pictured with your love.
You looked so happy.
In those days,
there were horses in the field
on the way to school.
Before Barratt and Persimmon
built their Georgian shoe-boxes.
For a short time, as other heads filled with Slade
or David Bowie, I played your greatest hits.
Adored your voice. The power and the passion.
Its sweetness.
As Barratt's houses filled the meadow row-by-row,
I turned to Bowie, Floyd.
Abandoned you for pastures more becoming
of adolescent boyhood.
But last Sunday,
as I watched the breaking news across a bar,
I knew exactly where that record was.
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Comments
Gorgeous tribute. If I've got
Gorgeous tribute. If I've got it right then you've eulogised a very special scouser, one who was always on in our house on Saturday nights.
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this is very nicely done.
this is very nicely done. Always better to be sparing than otherwise. You've built up the whole picture really effectively - put it in perspective
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Great. You didn't even
Great. You didn't even mention her by name, but conjured her up from words.
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It's lovely. As though you
It's lovely. As though you knew her through the music.
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Really nicely and gently done
Really nicely and gently done. Perfect title, too.
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