Tim
By Pat D
Tue, 12 Jun 2012
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TIM
At our school there's a boy called Tim
Everyone was so scared of him
He made everyone cower in fear
The teachers would not dare go near
Tim throughout his whole school life
Ruled the roost with tyranny and strife
He didn’t attend any classes
Some thought he should wear glasses
He couldn’t read he couldn’t write
The only thing he could do was fight
He was ho so mean and wicked too
He flushed a boys head down the loo
But Tim knew all where scared of him
they were even scared of the name TIM
he did not want this to be the case
so he changed his ways and joined the human race.
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Good effort Pat D. There
Good effort Pat D. There are a couple of typo's that need sorting out (re-read and you will find them). I have a poem about a schoolboy that you might like if you fancy a read. Some similar themes as well.
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