Paris 2014
By Pat G
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We listened to plane trees' roots burrowing
into pale soil where dogs briefly scrape.
We tasted tight tendons, vulnerable below stylish pants,
so vulnerable on the hindquarters of tiny dogs.
We saw les enfants juifs, on small legs, disappear
into the vast plains where weak sinews laid roots.
We felt the gunfire that made aluminium chairs
scrape against ancient limestone.
We remembered; touched, smelled, heard, saw
the plains where one bite at the heel was fatal.
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Interesting comparison to the
Interesting comparison to the bombs with dogs.
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The plane trees, aluminium
The plane trees, aluminium chairs and lime pavements give a particular sense of light, it gives a sense of Paris but also that feeling before you faint. Subtly violent, which is unusual, amplifies the horror somehow.
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I thought this was good -
I thought this was good - liked the clever twists of repetitions in the differing meanings. Felt the bleakness.
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