Seventeen Things
By pheonix-rising
Sat, 27 Jun 2009
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Seventeen things
I start at once,
and none seem to end,
they lay there
unfinished
for a year and a day,
For I’ve no time to spend.
Seventeen things
I start at once,
I never follow through,
my space clogged
with stories and pictures,
words and colours missing,
still something left to do.
Seventeen things
I start at once,
it never seems to end,
I can’t ever finish
what I start,
I still do it to this day,
Everything follows a
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heh heh, really nice. Why
heh heh, really nice. Why pick 17? Is there some interior pattern I'm missing, or is th
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I know how you feel!
Permalink Submitted by sarah wilson on
I know how you feel! Congratulations on the cherry!
sarah x
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That was great - you're in
That was great - you're in my mind! Fantastic end
Divorced Mum of 3 who has always loved to write. Haven't done so for a while, I somehow lost the knack. Loving writing again - except for the undone washing, the messy house, the kids wanting feeding..........
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wow. :D this is great! well
Permalink Submitted by brainbox11 on
wow. :D this is great! well done getting cherrypicked and i cant believe youre only 14! lucky you on the cherry. keep writing
Bekka :D
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