unshaven man at a window

By pilot light
Fri, 05 Dec 2008
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A fire escape on a Regency building
I can see into a kitchen where a tall woman cooks spaghetti
the street sends me shouts, revs, a man on a skateboard.
The tall woman shakes a colander in time with the
bhangra from downstairs
I’m not sure what I’m dancing to.
I retreat inside and drain an old beer
slide my feet under month old sheets
flick Doritos at the rolling news.
Through a window the tall woman drops
hot pasta onto two plates and
I wish that I could fly.
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I liked your economy,
Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on
I liked your economy, acuity, self deprecating humour and the use of pasta, spot on, thanks for sharing. L
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I really enjoyed this,
I really enjoyed this, particularly the sparse imagery. There is a tender sadness to it I can identify with.
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