ALAS!

By poetic prowess

Fri, 13 Jan 2012
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Theories have been propounded..their philosophies firmly grounded in the hearts of men..science read the signs,not religion..and the thoughts of man feed on the plot of discoveries.but truth can't be compromised and the truth that weaves across the width and breath of the skies flow into the oceans of eternity..the end surely will justify the means!

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Submitted by scratch on
Nicely crafted the way that you lulled the eye into believing the temporal, secular philosophies and then pulled the rug away. Subtle device that works well. I don't usually go for this stuff but I went for this one - well done poetic prowess.

 

Submitted by scratch on
One observation if I may? I would like to see a little reformatting in terms of the structure, although it's good as it stands, I accept.

 

Submitted by poetic prowess on
Thanx very much homie..yeah will work on the structure..GOD bless!!