Love.....pfft!
By PoeticalJustice
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I thought I had experienced love,
I guess I was wrong.
That wasn’t love, it was dependency out longed.
I mean when you love someone, your waking thought is about them,
With them, their waking thoughts were arguments and how to get their next tens.
I’ve always been the caring type and have never been materialistic,
But how come I give it my all, yet end up with nothing but pain after every relationship.
A partner should make you feel good, be the ying to your yang.
When you have a problem, they’re supposed to listen and understand.
But when your partner is the route to all of your problems and you sit there wishing they would swallow their own tongue,
That’s when you know it’s time to pack up your bags and move on.
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'dependency out longed.' - I
'dependency out longed.' - I liked that. I also think it's quite good when you actually get to the stage when you know it's time to, as celticman says, 'move on'. It's a positive thing and all round less painful - perhaps satisfying. This is what your poem made me think.
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