Sam
By PoetonaHill
Tue, 28 Mar 2017
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Sam.
smoky dingy café,
workmen shout and curse.
She floats among the tables
tending like a nurse, pauses
when she sees me, breaks
into a smile then skips behind
the counter, lingers for a while.
Keeps chatting while she's
serving, shedding all her
pain… then, when
I am leaving,
she becomes
a nurse again.
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Ah. Waitresses. I like the
Permalink Submitted by Parson Thru on
Ah. Waitresses. I like the aesthetic, which works really nicely with the subject and the meter. Makes the whole thing really crisp.
Parson Thru
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Short, sweet, love the fish!
Permalink Submitted by Ray Schaufeld on
Short, sweet, love the fish!
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