Tribes
By PoetonaHill
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Tribes
It’s tranquil here on summer days, green meadow and gold barley,
steady beat of August rain deep-puddles clay and marly.
Dormice scuttle in the hedge, grey squirrels are in glory.
Blackbird, from yon ancient oak, sets music to my story.
Fort and church lie in my path, how strange the two cohabit.
Ghosts of worthies haunt the one, the other’s home for rabbit.
The cottager, with all his brood, in yonder churchyard moulders,
while ‘neath the mound lie splintered bones of tribesmen, chief and soldiers.
I never thought of bloody war in these my woods and valleys
yet beneath my very feet lie many dread reveilles.
God knows I wade through mothers’ tears whichever way I wander
of men who gave us freedom’s choice to cherish or to squander.
My mind’s eye sees a troubled land where factions fan upheaval.
Power-drunk – they lunge and kill with disregard for evil.
I hear the clash of Celtic swords, see Saxon spears fly flashing.
Now Vikings from their long-ships leap and o’er the sand come dashing.
Norman arrows, from the sky, pin down the weary English.
Swordsmen, charging on the scene, beleaguer and extinguish.
They crush the white rose or the red and fill the fields with gore.
Then all around, in Civil War, I hear the canons roar...
I waken now as kingdoms merge to form a mighty nation,
sensing that salvation lies in peaceful integration.
For common-people are the glue that holds a land secure,
and such a land, where all are one, will prosper and endure.
Yet even now there float dark clouds across my sunny skies.
Forming in new phobic-groups, diverse communities arise.
Politics of identity are full of fatal flaws,
for tribal lands, we’ve seen before, are prone to tribal wars.
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Good poem. I like the
Good poem. I like the sentiments, the sense of history, and the message.
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I like the way you've layered
I like the way you've layered the history in this, and the message too, as above.
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Learning lessons from history
Learning lessons from history, and that under our feet. Though so saddened by the times of conflict, good to think of the times of relative peace between, and realise the futility of conflict unless imposed and has to be rebutted. The verse flows very well. Rhiannon
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Round of applause
...for your metre, rythmn and rhyme, immediately wanted to read it out loud.
Would make a cracking folk song :)
best regards
Lena x
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A wonderful use of language
A wonderful use of language and rhythm, with layers of history and a glimpse of tomorrow. This is our wonderful Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day! Please share/retweet if you've enjoyed it.
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Wow !!! Poetonahill. This is
Wow !!! Poetonahill. This is so wonderful a read and so powerful a message. Each time I read it, I’m taken deeper into its profoundness, set in days gone by, in overlays which reverberate into our world, now, on every shore. When will we all learn from the leaves beneath our feet
Marvelous...... Thank You......MarciaMarcia
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