Memory
By pom99
Sat, 27 Feb 2016
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Memory is old, scarred and twisted plastic
You can’t drown it,
You can’t burn it
You can bury it.
Only for it to resurface
when you dig
Leaving your hands dirty and fragrant again
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I really like the idea and
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I really like the idea and the flowing structure which is interrupted in the middle. I think the last line needs work to really finish it off with the power it has begun with.
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