Shoot The Line
By PoppyS
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Inhaled
crinkled brown
paper bags.
Straight cut ice filled with rage
you chase it all to defeat the pain.
Archaic providence
like Lenin on his
deadly prowl.
Inflated vein -
target ready and located – so shoot
the line.
Think
you still
can walk a vertical path?
Like some
self-satisfied lizard –
you skulk, your
organs now speeding
abattoir bound.
Shapes
of children playing
souvenir bottles of party lemonade
death becomes
you – so why be afraid
Bleed
it on the ground.
You are cold, dead
stoned and way beyond our fixing...
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Very stark, with the beauty
Very stark, with the beauty of some of the lines providing a contrast - 'a self satisfied lizard' is particularly great, and the final line being really chilling. Sadness and frustration eloquently delivered.
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