Not Fair

By prettyrose

Mon, 21 Sep 2020
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7 comments
 

Day after day,we grieve for you,
The heartache of that cruel,
Confused, painful day,
Will never, ever go away.
 

It was sudden and we felt
Such a heart-ripping
Blow which is still Raw
To the core for us all.

But with our precious
Memories, we keep
You alive :),although
There are times we
Feel, as if we can't
Breath or survive.
 

Certificate U
Poem
Adult Love :) Stories/Poems
Love

Comments

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Sad loss. You describe your raw emotions very clearly. Hard times. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by prettyrose on

Hello Rhiannonw, thank you so much for your time and comment, its nice to hear from you, hope you and family are well,

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Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by london_calling79 on

Always living on in our memories. Such sad beuaty. 

 

Submitted by prettyrose on

Hi london_Calling, appreciate your time and comment, yes always are no matter how many days, years.

 

:)

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Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

You describe so well the heartache of loosing a loved one. The hurt that's weaved into your poem speaks volumes.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by prettyrose on

Thank You Jennifer for your comments and time spent reading poem.Its really nice to hear off you :) I am not on here much lately m health and work, but always nice to hear from my ABC family :) x

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Keep Writing xxx

Submitted by prettyrose on

Really lovey to hear off you :) and thank you so much for your comment :) hope you and loved ones are ok. keep smiling , keep safe x

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Keep Writing xxx