Worn Out Old Thing
By prettyrose
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To look beyond what
Your eyes see, is not
Easy and can be misleading.
I have many lines and are
Not at my best, but the
Story's i could tell you
Would give you a fun
Fest.
Laughs I have shared
Tears I have heard,moans
And groans that maybe
Should not of been aired.
We can be more than a garden
Bench,hammock,patio or fence.
We are were people enjoy having
A quite moment to think,enjoy a
Crafty drink.
Or just enjoy the moonlight
When daylight disappears
In to our atmosphere.
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Hi Bee, I hope your well.
Hi Bee, I hope your well
.
Aww and thank you for reading my poem. I am so glad you liked it.
Take care
Trish x
Keep Smiling
Keep Writing xxx
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To be a good listener, and
To be a good listener, and encourager to others to relax and appreciate little things like,
'Or just enjoy the moonlight When daylight disappears In to our atmosphere.' is a precious thing. I do so like those last 2 lines, Pretty Rose. Rhiannon
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Hi Rhiannon. I hope your well
Hi Rhiannon. I hope your well.
I am so glad you enjoyed my poem and glad you could draw out the message in the poem, I have had some lovely, thoughtful moments on the bench in the picture and drafted poem or two, not always good lol,but enjoyed writing them while sitting on garden furniture,.
I love the last couple lines best myself
Thank you for reading, and your lovely comments, I appreciate them and value your feedback.
Keep Smiling
Keep Writing xxx
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Lovely, Trish.Best times in
Lovely, Trish.Best times in life are moments shared, just being. Pour us a crafty one, I want to hear stories to make my hair curl.
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Hi Vera, Thank you for
Hi Vera, Thank you for reading and commenting, I appreciate it. Your kind comments made me smile, especially where you say you want stories to make your hair curl lol.
Take Care
Keep Smiling
Keep Writing xxx
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