Fog
By queen beatle
Wed, 08 Oct 2008
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The fog came
Slinking between the houses
Like a wolf among sheep.
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very Haiku - to make it a
Permalink Submitted by littleditty on
very Haiku - to make it a Haiku might make another nice version of your atmospheric poem - 5/7/5 syllables per line, with a Nature theme usually - here - just as an example:
The fog misting in
Slinking between the houses
A wolf among sheep
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this is lovley. i dont think
Permalink Submitted by alice sunderland on
this is lovley. i dont think you should give a shit about it being a haiku or not.
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