The Salmon of Doubt
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By queen beatle
- 1697 reads
The ranting winds that bucket us
With stinging salt lashes on skin
And screaming frozen harpy-ridden fury
Will soon be kitten-soft and sighing.
Jaw-clenched sails will furl and dry;
Coaxed out colours in the sun
Painted slapdash on the canvas
Herald the warmth of a chlorophyll sky.
The wood, though now it warps and groans
Will wring itself out in uniform rows
Shake off the silt from heavy blue ropes
And slice on eastwards through the sea.
A ship laid bare; unchastened, undeterred
Besieged by long tempestuous nights
A crumpled pulp of paper in one small breath
A golden-strong garden by the next.
So fish out your salmon of doubt
From silk-lined bootleg bottle pockets
And swallow fast the briny deep
To rise, and roar, and fall, and sleep.
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I love this. Beautifully
I love this. Beautifully descriptive, and so well constructed, with the contrasts between the opening two lines of each of verse and the last two. One I shall definitely remember.
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original and beautiful
The comparisons and use of metaphor is excellent and is so in the many images. Beautiful and original. Clean and clear. All your work is.
&& Keep well!
PS. Especially the concluding verse was 100% on the mark. Tragic. Madness. But for the grace of God.
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I see you have some old (new) stuff
You have some old (new) stuff I had missed I plan to work through them systematically. I enjoy your work a lot the earlier experimental stuff especially.
All the best and keep well! Tom Brown
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