House Arrest : A Drabble
By raetsel
Tue, 07 Sep 2010
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I knew it was a risk going out in daylight but I was desperately low on supplies.
As I turned the corner of my street I saw the dark, menacing outline of one of their vans patrolling.
Would my neighbour cover for me?
I just couldn’t risk it.
I was on my last warning.
I sprinted down the alley.
Lungs bursting, heart pounding, I vaulted the garden fence and crashed through the back door.
Was I safe?
I looked up the hall and saw with dread, there on the mat, a small card:
“We tried to deliver a parcel today…”
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Hi raetsel, I enjoyed this
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi raetsel,
I enjoyed this story, it was short and sweet.
Makes you realise how good it is not to have a
conscience.
Jenny.
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I really enjoyed this -
Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
I really enjoyed this - never heard of a drabble before. you managed to get a lot of tension into a very small space - well done!
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