The Coal Porter
By ralph
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Walking with the sand tide
against gassed winds.
A man shot through
gunmetal blue,
seeks coal.
There were other days
of counting the ways,
on how to live.
He's been told.
Where the young sung
for sixpence,
kissed girls
in rock pools
for fools gold.
Where his Mother
sold shells,
Oyster ice creams
in front of
Punch's violence.
Waiting for
Madam Turner's Tarot
to turn the cards
into another child.
But then the gale came
and took the sea south.
Blew them all to Kingdom come.
And then were no other days
of counting the waves,
the boats on the horizon.
Madam Turner's lies.
Just the coal in his sack.
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Full of seaside melancholy
Full of seaside melancholy and stories.
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All I can think of to say is
All I can think of to say is that this is excellent.
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yeah thought this was
yeah thought this was fantastic, so much sad beauty, moments&tales with such economy of words. from 'gassed winds' to the lovely 'There were other days/of counting the ways,/on how to live.' and 'turn the cards into another child', absolutely brilliant piece.
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