Near Paddington

By ralph
Mon, 15 Sep 2008
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3 comments
Dead in the house fire.
Nineteen seventy two.
A girl, six years old.
No remains.
Today.
The Father.
A man of sadness,
age and rheumatism,
celebrates her life.
Walking streets,
with his head down.
Nursery rhymes of her,
only for him.
In a pub,
near Paddington,
he buys one drink.
He fumbles loose change.
And in the sepia mirror,
she’s here.
A woman now.
Waving at her Mother.
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Wonderfully atmospheric
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Wonderfully atmospheric writing. A beautifully crafted poem.
Tina
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Sad, but beautifully
Sad, but beautifully expressed. I wouldn't change anything. Good job.
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like the way the pace picks
like the way the pace picks up and love 'nursery rhymes of her' Margot
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