Summer daze
By Rowtag
Sat, 16 Mar 2013
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Rippling stream crossing the valley green, Curling, swiveling and dribbling To and through the grass so lean. Thriven fields immersed in golden sun, Radiating, shinning and flourishing Till the moon make their bloom be dun. Night cloaked this rural scenery, Atop home hillock we stood gaping Wide-eyed at our uncanny liberty Smoke rings float through the nocturnal infinity the homestead lights gleam and shine a terrace Where whiffs of aromas infused with wine and delight Accompany guileless laughter As our companionship crackles like broken candle flames in an immensity grown darker.
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This I like very much. Good
This I like very much. Good rhyme and only a little tinkering to make it a stand out effort.
Well done and welcome to ABCtales.
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This is a lovely piece,
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This is a lovely piece, Raphy, it flows beautifully, and as Scratch says it won't take much work to make it outstanding.
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