Up Carningli
By Rhiannonw
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(north Pembrokeshire 7/5/19)
Beautiful lush green peaceful Gwaun Valley:
walk up through woods of birdsong
on to the heathland –
bilberry, gorse, heather beginning to green –
higher up – stunted growth or bare;
notes of a cuckoo echoing
from time to time
from down below
reach the gentle top
sea below on the other side,
and snub nose of Dinas Head
pointing out, and Newport Sands;
scramble up the path through the
highest pile of rocks to
the ‘crow’s nest’ with 360° views
from just over 1000 feet above sea level:
careful!
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Another one of your wonderful
Another one of your wonderful walking ones :0)
love "woods of birdsong"
and :
notes of a cuckoo echoing
from time to time
from down below
you catch the space between so cleverly
and the feeling of height with "careful" as the last word, showing how you are balanced at the top of your poem. Do you conciously make the rhythm that of walking or does it just happen as you desrcibe how it felt to be there? It is as though you carry the reader with you
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