Habberley Valley

By Rhiannonw
Tue, 19 Jul 2016
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Habberley Valley, Kidderminster
Soft, lumpy sandstone outcrops,
weathered, worn, weird shapes
as if feet had walked wet sand,
and rivulets formed gullies,
and then the dips relaxed and softened,
froze.
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Hi Rhiannon,
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Hi Rhiannon,
it looks like your imagination has really inspired this piece of nature, with all those weathered, worn, weird shapes forming in the stone. It makes you wonder! At all the feet that would have walked in your footsteps.
Nice piece of writing, very much enjoyed reading.
Jenny.
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Hi Rhiannon
Hi Rhiannon
I liked the imagery of this poem - especially the bit about the dips.
Jean
Jean Day
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